Last week, many students sent letters to the editor in advisory class. Bird Eye News wanted to look at some of these, either to address concerns or answer questions. We appreciate everyone who sent a letter and is actively involved in the Bird Eye News—the letters that were chosen just warranted a quicker response than some others.
Your title is so bad and great at the same time. It holds the perfect criteria to be a clickbait Buzzfeed title. Though I’m not sure if the all capital letters was your decision, it really helped the effect. Also, in the title it says by Roger Rogers, as a pseudonym. Roger Rogers is a great pseudonym, especially considering the subject matter. But under it there is the real name of the author, so what is the point? At least you had a spoiler warning.
Regards, Joshua Droppa”
Firstly, I assume the piece you are talking about is “Spoilers! Star Wars Episode VIII Leaked—Real or Fake?… Story by Roger Rogers.” You should know that the name underneath the title isn’t the writer, but the editor (in this case Jada, but it’s often my editing as well). Roger Rogers is, as you pointed out, one of our writer’s aliases. As for the capital letters, if you look through the website that is our formatting across the board and nothing to do with a clickbait.
We appreciate the feedback though, and it should be noted that we don’t aim for clickbait when choosing titles.
I have to be honest with you. I don’t watch and/or read your articles. When I go to your website I don’t have any interest in reading the articles. They don’t draw to my attention. I have only watched one of your YouTube videos. I am subscribed to your channel.
The website go there first thing that I think of when I look at it is boring. My mind doesn’t want to take the time to read the article if there is nothing there to draw my attention. When I say it looks boring is because all the colors are brown, black and white. My attention just leaves.
The YouTube Channel I can’t say much. It doesn’t draw my attention. Maybe you can try different life hacks, DIY’s, different exercises, doing different lessons that people could use (piano, taekwondo, singing, and dancing) and fun useful things to do. Maybe you can add some pizzazz. I honestly don’t know what you should add to your YouTube channel. Thank you for your time.
Kind Regards, Yakira L. Jones”
Well firstly, thank you for subscribing to the channel! I believe we are at 30 or so subscribers right now, meaning that our subscriber base has nearly doubled in the past two weeks. As for our website design, we try and cover it with pictures to give a contrast to the background. The black-background and white-text theme is actually much less boring that the inverse of that, while still being legible.
What I would like to point out is that Meghan is featuring a cooking show, which actually pulls in lots of your DIY suggestions. Bird Eye News is trying to focus on events relevant to students as well, meaning we have to keep a balance on what content we post. Hopefully, this sheds some light on our editing decisions.
I have an idea for you YouTube channel. I propose that you and your associates come together and video document a student’s service project. Perhaps you can come together and vote for which project you want to make a mini document on. You could then post the potential video on your channel. This would show the ‘tubers’ what students of the Forrest Bird Charter School can/will do. Please take my suggestion into account.
With Regards, Rocco Sherman”
Actually, the upcoming Harrison Report showcases quite a few student projects. We also have an interview with the documentary crew, who are videoing other students for their own project. However, I agree that Bird Eye News could do an article or two on the service learning project. One of our goals this trimester was to involve students more in journalism, hence the letters to the editor, and I think that would be a good step in doing that.
Most of the letters had positive things to say about our involvement with the student body, and further encouraged articles relating to FBCS (whether it be prom, fidget spinners, or surprisingly deep social issues). Also note that anyone who wants to give some feedback is free to do so anytime. This feedback is really valuable, and again, thanks to everyone who sent letters to the editor.